The Saddest Moment of My Life
As I opened the door, my piercing eyes stopped at the lethargic body lying on the white bed. Her face was pale and wrinkled, depicting the depth of pain she had undergone; her hair gone white and listless body showing enormous weight loss in such a short span of time. I had never given much thought to how I would say her goodbye but saying goodbye to someone you love most this way was the worst thing ever happened to anyone in this world. My mind struggled searching for ways to abate her profuse pain but nothing could be done.
I was helpless.
I stood there, despondent. She managed to half-open her grim-filled eyes and pointed towards me. My heart skipped a beat; I was sinking into the abyss of depression as the time of saying goodbye drew near. I moved towards her briskly. Having in mind she would never be able to see her eight-year old child again, to compensate for all the pains the child would face in life, to kiss her daughter when she would cry, she gave her a long glance and kissed infinite times. One last hug and I would not see her again.
She took a deep breath; hot water flew down my cheeks in torrents. I knew she had gone. I was bereft. I had lost my mother; I was the poorest person on earth. That was the time I was sad most. That was the time I cried most. That was undoubtedly the saddest moment of my life.
Written By: Maha Yusuf – Chemical Engineering Student @SCME, NUST
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I had tears in my eyes by the time I finished reading the story!! Cheers to the author!!
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Wow. I am amazed at how you are able to contain such feelings in so few words. Truly heart touching! Good work
this is wonderful.this article requires no real special knowledge to appreciate it.great one i’d love to read what you write.you have that priceless fluidity in you !!
marvelous, heart touching, the whole plot is awesome
truly reflects ur writing skills
especially the way u didnt let the reader predict dat it was ur mother at the end
liked it
beautiful words <3 Really touching
hahahahha. is main sad kya tha?
wesa samajh nai aya mujha. iska urdu version koi upload ker dy. thanks 
hey great choice of words and their usage… <3 touching…:'(
really moving….
Heart felt words… Best prose I read in a long time
I’m speechless Maha..It touched my heart deep inside:/
excellent job
Awesome! which language is this?
Nice presentation of emotions. Really touching! kudos to author!
Quite a touchy story … did this really happen?
simple, short and continuous! the feelings for a mother are articulated in an apprehensive manner. the right choice of words and the flow of text touch readers heart bringing tears in eyes and inject a fear full emotion of losing mother realizing her importance. really inspirational. keep up the good work.
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When I couldn’t get what I NEEDED the most-LOVE,my saddest moment of lifetime. A word used so often in our lives that we no longer understand the deep meaning of it. I went through a lot of pain when it was gone from my life.I couldn’t get her in this life but surely afterlife i will fight with God over her.This world was not made for me thats why I was never answered.There is no existence of such thing called SELF for me.No matter what happened to me,I can not narrate here,even the medicines didn’t work on me.Life is miserable now and I could do is wait for DEATH.
may ALLAH ALMIGHTY bless all… surely if HE takes away sumthing frm his dear beings, he tests them to ultimately bless them with much more. a great piece of writing. rarely writers succeed in filling up the actual emotions in their words. wonder! lovely.
its really touchy…………………………../VAMOS MAHA……
this is simply awesome! A very touching story!
Wow…Good work author….I’m impressed
*cheers* 
Couldnt help myself stop crying after reading .. Best article i could have ever come across .. Reminds me of my own mother who passed away fighting various diseases ..
I have had just been reading it again n again n I can so relate it to myself ..
Speechless .. God bless you Maha and grant your mother the highest levels of Janat ul firdous ..
n to those who have this precious asset of nature with them; people serve your mothers to your utmost capabilities as there aint any replacement or any parallel to her love n compassion in this world.
Awsome article maha,i love the quality of writting and the emotions that are being expressed,very heart touching <3
very nice article…it touched my heart,we shd really value the perious relations tht Allah almight hs blessed us with before losing thm.
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